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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love how you weave in character details throughout your writing. This seemingly laidback teen charismatically swindles these gambling Irishman with his dart game talent. Your scene setup is great and your dialogue is good. I could follow the protagonist easily and differentiate between the Irishman and him. Overall a wonderful short story!
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