This is excellent. Reminds me of that old book "the little prince". That was one of my very favorite books as a child. Thank you for striking that particular chord in my mind. The old adage of walking a mile in anothers shoes comes to mind as well. And the be careful what you wish for one. It certainly gives me a reason to reflect on my own thoughts, much like The Little Prince always did. Other then minor spelling and gramatical errors I saw nothing wrong with this piece.
What? Where did that come from? Talk about random... LOL It was really well written though. The imagery was excellent. But um.. are those homicidal children that belong in a stephen king novel? who let them out to play with the neighbor? Yikes. And what is he smiling at? His head fell off!
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