You wrote this poem when you were 12? You must be an intelligent kid, because this is awesome. I wonder how much more your recent poems?! Thanks for sharing!
I'm new here and I'm glad to have your poem as one of the first pieces I've read here.
I love that it's full of imagery, it is successful in depicting that chilly gloomy atmosphere. I also think that putting periods and other punctuation marks will help the poem be understood better. And maybe a little utterance to balance your beautiful imagery.
Thank you for this poem! I hope to read more from you! :)
Claud
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