I very much enjoyed this poem, particularly the opening two lines which are very arresting. Also I thought it was a nice touch to leave the word "love" to the end as you have, repeat it like that, and then bring the poem back to its starting point at the end. I know it says to include "helpful tips for improvement" but I'd say these not needed.
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