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Review by Ben Haye II
Rated: E | (5.0)
Jerry, you are a wonderful writer and I am so happy you are my brother in Christ. Your story hit my heart. My family and I have been trying to do this each year. Old toys in good shape given to toy drives for homeless and unfortunate kids to make room for new ones. Containers of food given to the homeless and down-on-their-luck folks, dry goods given to our church pantry to go with turkeys for those who would otherwise go without. Bags of clothes given to Goodwill or church clothing drives.
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Review of First To Fall  
Review by Ben Haye II
Rated: E | (5.0)
I’ve read this many times, have in saved in my notes. The suffering of my Jesus for all the world’s sinner his blood was shed.
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Review of I Remember  
Review by Ben Haye II
Rated: E | (5.0)
The prose excellent, the words deep, the reader can feel you relationship and you loss. Makes me sad that I didn’t know more of Jack in his last years. Tears stain my cheeks, I wish I could be there to console you.
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Review by Ben Haye II
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Serene and elegant. I like the image it creates in my mind. It elevates the reader to a scene above the clouds to watch the animals fly and frolic, wishing they could join in. The fact that these are wild animals (except the pig, although it could be a wild boar) and not domesticated, gives the reader a feeling of being on a flying safari. It would make a good bedtime story for children.
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