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Review by Rhee R. Lee Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Thank you for sharing, Krazy Anonymous. I read this poem and thought of all the times I felt I had things to say but seemingly no ability to be able to put them down coherently, albeit at all - like brain diarrhea!

Looking through again, I notice that vowel is misspelled in the first stanza. Could I also suggest some more punctuation throughout, like commas and full stops, especially in the fourth and fifth stanzas?

Keep writing please! :)
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