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Review by Daniel Wolf Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I don't think this should be rated E. Definately 18+. However, this was a very well written story. I was pulled into the story immediately, and captured by the characters and scenes. An excellent job at quickly building your characters, and putting them in scenes that the reader can visualize with very little decription (everyone knows what a theater or a busy street looks like). I'm "jealous" of your writing ability. Very intelligent (even if confused). Write on!
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