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Review of A Legacy of Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is really terrific. I only wish there was more to it. I love the name "Millicent," it's probably the most grandmotheriest name ever.
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Review of Old Bedroom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Your word choice is really great, and your description is confident and concise. One thing I think you could do to increase that confidence: You can just say "a box full of pictures/photos," and the image may be more powerful without the qualifier of "attesting that this place..." Let the reader put it together. Either way, your writing seems pretty tight. Keep at it!
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