I think that this is a very good story! I loved it, the detail, the substance. It wasn't just words on a page, I really wanted to read more. As always, there could've been more detail in a few places and maybe some emotion, but with just this pretty much objective view on the story it's fantastic. If you have more stories like these, I'm definitely going to read them. :)
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