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Review by A.M. Hinton
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This story was dark and disturbing. I likes it alot, alough the true horror of this persons life was terrible to think of.
Finally his

pain ended, but he had also lost himself leaving an empty monster that had no

thoughts other then to survive.
I didnt really understand this ending, It made me feel as if the person which had been growing on me for the whole story was gone, and it ruined it a bit for me.
You expressed the creatures feeling very well, and it made me feel empathy for him.
This piece had brilliant imagination, I could not contradict anymore of the story at all
One bad thing was the setout of the story. It made the read look choopy as there was huge gaps in between sentences.
Thank you fro writing a brilliant story.
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