Truly horrifying. I would've died already if I stepped one inch into that creepy "Fun House". Its a great story, and deserves a pat in the back. I feel truly bad for Johnny and Becky, and I hope nothing bad happened to them.. It should be overwhelming knowing your the one who caused all of this. Heres something for your good story. I wish you to make another one. I mean- This is nothing, but its better than nothing.
I really like your story! And, I think you are right.. Maybe do it in America. And I don't think that even if the city is called New "Delhi", Dosen't mean people would really come for meat.. How ironic. Anyway, Nice job. I really love your story. I hope I don't end up with the same misfortune..
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