i felt a melting pot of emotions surface while reading your poem. i found it sad but uplifitng at the same time.
Sad beacause a child had passed and uplifting because of this line
"His closed eyes now see more glory, than ours opened ever do".
i not a religious person but these words make me think twice
Great poem well done
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