When I started looking for a puzzle didn't know what kind I was looking for. Then I found yours and it looked fun and it was. My son even looked on to help and found a few. Not to many words, but just enough. They were easy to find. Cat was the last word we had to find took a few minutes.
Your list is a good one, your right you never know when you need to pack up for a such a storm. We had to pack up for Rita and by the time we decided to go get some food to take alot of stuff was picked over. I waited until the last minute to wash, but we were lucky we got to go home after four days and Rita ended going more up the coast. It was a fun and easy puzzle. The words were easy to find. I enjoyed it.
Aprostitute trying to make money from a teacher in the mornimg before he makes his way to a school for young girls. This could be a bit confussing to think you are writing about two different subjects. You should try to find away to tie them together by having one of your characters such as Mrs.Bea make a remark about the prostitute that trying to make money only two blocks away. This is a good ideal and easy to raed.
Was easy enough and a nice choice of movies, characters and directors to all come together something for everyone and fun too. Not to hard for a word serch and the words were easy enough to find. It didn't take a whole lot of time either, I did it while waiting for my son to get dressed.
I know sometime we all wish we could just float away and disapear for awhile if not sometimes forever. Sometimes we decided on something that is hard to do, but in the end we know what we have to do just like Katherine did. This is a great story and keep writing.
Yes,I think you you continue it is a story with lots of heart and soul. The title doesn't not give the story away,but the title is what got my attention to read your story and I kept reading to find out if Angel was going to have her dreams come true. Something that I think we all hope for to happen someday. So yes keep writing!!!
I picked your story, because am also writing a story about a husband that beats his wife, but for different reason. Your story really grabed me from the beginning and kept me hanging on as I read. My story is a alot calmer than yours makes me wonder if I should make some changes to mine. I wouldn't change yours if I were you. Keep writing great job.
An amazing story it grabed me from the begging and I had to read on to find out what poor Rudy was up against to see what was messing up his land. I never guessed it was from a deers point of view seeing things though the eyes of a deer. Keep writing let people see things in a differnt view is great
This is a really good story and well told with a surprise ending. One thing you might want to think about you have space in between your paragraph which is good, but maybe you could indent your first sentance just a little that would make it look more like a paragraph. Keep writing and you did a great jod grabbed my attention and kept it.
I know writing story like these helps heals the soul, even though I have never been on such a road and know that I never will, or atleast I hope not. I don't like being sick from drinking to much wine at home. I can never understand the raod you have been done, But I believe in second chances and that what you have.
You write with such passion and didn't the one thing we learn about writing and that's write about something you know. I hope you keep writing.
I usually don't read this type of a monster story.
I started reading and it got my attention so I kept reading and soon I was hooked. Then before I know I needed to know more. It was a good things that they help you get the damage fixed with no cost, or that could end up being coastly. And it was a good thing that the town came together and help to get rid of the fog monster. Keep writing and good job.
I can truely feel her pain and feel her sorrow. Sometimes when love hurts is even a time that she needs to move on from someone who may never change.
The words to your song are beauiful and sad and you can hear the pain in the words you write. I wish I could hear the music even though the sound might be sad. Keep writing what is in your heart and feel free to express.
I can understand the dislike of airplane food. Just a few weeks ago, I went to Vegas and they served nothing on the flight eventhough we ended up being late. But, on the way back we were served a snake a very small sandwich with turkey, or ham, I picked the turkey which was 2 slices and smaller amount of cheese, small bag of carrots and fun size of M&M's. The best part was the wine that was free that I got with a coupon for a free drink. I can under the dislikes of airplane food. This was a nice poem to read, keep up the good writing, writng about something that people can relate to.
I'm also a mother a mothers love is never dying and putting your boys first is something that needs no second thought. I would have done the same thing with no second thought, I have boys also and sadest is where all the other lives that where lost.
Something that was once a childs play mate, something that children loved to look behind them as they jumped and skipped to see if their friend was keeping up. Now to think that maybe they should have watched in case their shadow was something they were not wanting to be there.
I liked it it gave a new twist to a childs old playmate. Good job and keep writing!
Thank you for the gift points, I"m glad to help in anyway that I can. I really am still learning things about this website. I truly love this website and have read a few things and some I have really enjoyed. I know my story are getting viewed but noone is rating my stories. I'm still checking thing out to learn more. Do you have any suggestions on how to help.
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