Hi Dory,
I hope you are doing well. It is cold here in New Jersey. Here is my review. Enjoy!
Your opening was very well done. I followed the 'Kari" to the end of the story because I wanted to know more about her. I liked way the details you gave moved the story forward. This is a style of writing that will help me improve my skills. Thank you for sharing this story with me.
Have a great writing day,
MirrorMirror
I enjoyed reading this Halloween because it was suspenseful. The plot was original and exciting. The action was easy to follow because the characters were daring. I wanted to know what happened next. You delivered a good story and I look forward to reading more of your works. 3 cheers to monsters in the dark.
I enjoyed reading this Halloween story because it was clever. The plot was easy to follow because the characters were engaging and interesting. I admire your storytelling skills. I thank you for the honor of reviewing your work. I look forward to reading more of your works. 3 cheers for surprising me too!
I very much enjoyed reading this Halloween story. The child's viewpoint made the plot stand out. It was simple to follow. It gave the character a soft touch. I look forward to reading more your works with the hope of becoming a better writer. 3 cheers to the fuul moon.
I enjoyed reading this scary story because the main character was tragic. Her mental struggles made the plot twists simple to follow. It was impressive how your beginning storyline was also used to end the story. I will borrow this technique for my future works. It is a great way to bind the story together. I look forward to reading more of your works in the future. 3 cheers for tragic psychos.
I enjoyed reading this story. It was simple to follow. I liked the way you used tragedy in the plot. I have read about love driving a character mad before, but never to this level. Very impressive. I like my fireside horror stories with no survivors. 3 cheers to bloody happy lovers.
This charming poem captures the moment of madness like no other. My feeble mind was provoked with wicked images of someone having a very bad day. This is a work well done in the looney spirit of halloween. 3 cheers to the voodoo bartender.
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