this is very cute
i like the ending!
it reminds me of when i was younger, i mean a real child
when i thought of what i'd do the next day
i did this before i went to bed each night
the day tomarrow time i tried to think of it as
i like the set up of heroic couplet
its pretty cool i might have to try it!!
not bad
i've never heard the song but i'm about to look it up!!
(to hear it!!)
that was really...waoh... what can i say but A-MAZ-ING.
I can't believe this!!
the "funny" thing... i've felt like this before
not now but a few months ago. i'm better now!!
ever more
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