Hooah! Powerful words that speak the truth about us veterans. Thank you for serving our country bravely and honorably. Where would this country be without us veterans?
God Bless you,
Korri US Army Disabled Vet
Have you forgotten what happened on 9-11-01? I will NEVER FORGET!
It was a good attempt at writing poetry. I find that the stanzas are choppy; they don't seem to flow along. Have you written poetry a lot? It is one of my favorite genres. This poem needs a little rhythm to it to make it a piece that is smooth to read.
Sometimes short and sweet are the way to go. A very descriptive poem and wonderful tribute to your wife. I don't see any grammatical or spelling troubles. Nicely done.
Very nice! I like it a lot being a small town country girl myself. I still love to see those Ws on some cowboy's butts... gotta love that W... Wrangle butts drive me nuts.
Back to the sig... very nicely down. The colors are wonderful and the horse and rider ROCK!
wow! what a poem! I hate to say it but I've been there myself. Not a fun way to live. You can feel the emotional roller coaster ride of emotions in this poem.I dont' see any grammatical issues with it. In fact, I have nothing to say but GREAT!
Very nicely done... truly gets out the emotions of a person with bipolar disorder.
Smokey is very cute! Must be very hungry. I love the purple collar. Thank you for sharing the photo. I have ferrets. Would love a cat but hubby says he is allergic to them, but I know he just hates them
The picture itself is good. If you want it to really stand out, though, try putting a different color down under the dish... a towel or sheet. To make it stand out more.
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