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Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
interesting results from this set of people
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Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
great read. It appears your main character knew he was doomed but wanted his mother to remember him when she saw the flag he served.I would ask anyone who is upset by the sight of "OLD GLORY" not to see what upsets them but to see what gave "OLD GLORY"her name(the better parts).for example M.L. King Jr.,G.W. Carver. B.T.Washington,T.A.Edison and so on
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Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
great read. Sadly true for many veterans. You could also transport your character to any front and any weather but the "movie" will be similar.
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Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
great read. The sad parts are that this can be said of any war since the invention of gunpowder and ceiling fans. The unfortunate part is this may still be true for some time to come. Again great read.
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Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
great job. I do not know what else to say because you have probably"heard it all" by now. Thanks anyway.
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Review of TRY AND TELL ME  Open in new Window.
Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great job. Thank you SPC. I just retired. I was in Iraq in05.I would like to ask a protester if they want to trade places with anyone over there,thus EARNING the right to complain. again great job and thanks on behalf of ALL your brothers/sisters in arms(past and present).
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Review of Proud to Be  Open in new Window.
Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
great job. congrat. also.
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Review of The Resistance  Open in new Window.
Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
this was written to HONOR those that gave"THE LAST FULL MEASURE OF DEVOTION!"
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Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
read history (before it is rewritten)
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Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
good game
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Review of Prayer 101  Open in new Window.
Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
great job. I can always used advise about prayer.
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Review of Ground Fight  Open in new Window.
Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
good job
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Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
great job thanks for a new viewpoint.
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Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
great job. I never thought of it like that.
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Review of America Bless God  Open in new Window.
Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
great job. I am glad you do not seem to want to be politically correct as you want to be historically correct.
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Review of Prayer of Promise  Open in new Window.
Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
great job. you seem to have it sewed up for anyone to understand.
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Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
great job You have summed it up greatly thanks.
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Review of The Missing Man  Open in new Window.
Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
good job. It shows the misfortunes of some soldiers. Remember the individual soldier was fighting for those you say were dying around him.
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Review of Sound of Freedom  Open in new Window.
Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
great read.There is one more sound of freedom which is older than the sonic boom but is not often heard unless it is in honor of the departed or in defense of the law,(the fire of either rifles(honor/law) or pistols(mostly law).
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Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Great read. It does sound like fiction but i believe it. I have spent much of my life reading military stories(fact and fiction). Remember"Fact is stranger than fiction."? Now you know why many of your brother combat veterans do not talk freely of their war stories unless it is with another combat vet. again great read.
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Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
great read. You have made it a current convoy but unfortunately ,with little change, it could be almost any war you can name in history. Again great read.
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Review of a soldiers life  Open in new Window.
Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
great read. On their behalf thank you. Have you ever heard"I'd tell you but then I'D have to kill you"? If some soldiers told you what they have been through the story alone might kill you.again great read and thanks
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Review of Our Government  Open in new Window.
Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
great read. Own the land-#1 they can't afford the price paid for it by others in their stead.#2 they would waste it faster than is being done now.#3who would rent from them?
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Review of The World Apart  Open in new Window.
Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
sounds good-both what you have written and the fact you hope&pray you are wrong. I share your belief so much I have come up with the only way to win a nuclear war. Get a catcher's mit and find ground zero. The first death will be the winner. Unfortunately I also believe our weapons,especially nukes, have reduced their size not their destructive force.
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Review of Blood of Brothers  Open in new Window.
Review by sarge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
great job. I wonder how many people understand how accurate you are?
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