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Review of Bullet Wound  Open in new Window.
Review by calcifer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is a really good piece.. i enjoyed the twist in the end... :3
you have properly delivered the imagery/scene in the situation..
my favorite lines were:
"Once you’d tucked me warm in my bed,
And I finally felt okay again,
Like I could trust you,
You pulled out your gun,
And you shot me again. "
its so simply done, yet it clearly articulates the characters thoughts and feelings.. and i like how the killer appears to be a psycho.. :3
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Review by calcifer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
this is a great piece, your choice of words were perfect to describe the character's urge and feeling towards the girl she just met... :3

amazing babe.. hahahaha its soo you... i love you... :P
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Review by calcifer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is very true and heartbreaking... your choice of words are very exact for what the character here is going through.... you're amazing.... :3
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Review by calcifer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
wow... this is so accurate, i can easily empathize with the character in your poem, your words are limited but you are able to deliver the essence of it... :3

amazing piece... great job
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