Very well written mate. When I started I wasn't that much interested and thought I would just go along couple of line and then jump to other story. But once I started reading through I could not stop till I reached the end. Your every sentence grabbed my attention and made me read further.
Keep up the good work. I can see you writing excellent thriller piece.
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.07 seconds at 8:55am on Dec 22, 2024 via server WEBX1.