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Rated: E | (3.5)
I like how you gave lots of information about Chinese New Year in an entertaining way. I feel like you know what you are talking about and the information is accurate. I think the first person point of view from the cat worked really well. You also showed how the main character grew and changed over the course of the story.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I really enjoy this poem. I also believe that the eyes are points of contact between souls so I appreciate how you worded that thought. The line "Windows bar Hold" is an unclear message for me and seems to stall the flow of the poem.
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