I have to say, it definitely grabbed me. I had to go back and read it three times just to ensure I caught it all in my mind. Subtle, yet perfect imagery, and a simple ode life's relaxing downtime.
This resonated with me because I was able to grab onto a number of metaphors that I do not believe were intended (hell, maybe they were). For example, I was easily able to take this for addiction; drug, drink, even the addiction of love, as the ending points towards. The repetition works well. Enjoyed the read.
--Tones
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