i liked this story as well. it was so creative and you my friend, are very talented. i couldn't stop reading it. it was like i was reading a good book that i couldn't put down.
i loved your poem, 'drowning in daybreak.'. you are obeviously very talented and have skills in your writing. you painted a picture in my mind of a girl waiting for something to come into her life. a great read.
well done Gab!
don't forget to check out some of my writing on my page, rate them and give me some feedback. i've only got to put 2 on so far, but i will put more on over the summer holidays.
seeya
Tommi
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