That is a good poem. I didn't see any grammar, spelling, or punctuation. I wouldn't change anything about it. I liked everything about it. You liked to write poems I can tell. How long have you been writing poetry? Your poems are the best there is. Tommy16
Great story. I love the suspence. That was a short story but I couldn't stop reading it. I read it twice. When you write you next short story I will try to be the first one to read it. I think that you should enter that story in a contest. That was a very good story.
Tommy16
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