So far, this is absolutely wonderful. The character, Lizzie, is great as well as the antagonist, Karen. I love everything about it so far and look forward to reading the final product.
By no means am I a professional writer, but in my opinion, it is well written. The paragraphs transitioned very well with the direction of the story.
Thank you for sharing and I wish you well in completing this book and I can't wait to read rest of the story.
Great job!
TMT.
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