This was an exceptional story! It had a visual sense to it as the characters and the actions in it were easy to see in the minds eye. The familiarity of the descriptions are perhaps the most appealing. There is a sense that the reader has been brought into the kitchen and life of a family farm reminiscent of the beloved television show "The Waltons." Great job!
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