wow that is a great poem I just love to read stuff like this it is so great how you can just let it all out and not feel like you are overwhelmed by writing it I have so much trouble writing it take for ever for me to get things out I like the fact that it is about mental state as well I also like the fact that it is like a riddle to me anyways that is the way I see it.
Wow what a great piece I thought this was the best I had read so far I felt myself there with every word I read that was scary it gave me chills thanks keep up the good work. I am not a great writer but I am learning if I could learn to write like you that would be awesome.
I think that you done a great job on this it was very creative and very open you could see yourself there as you were reading it. I could hear the bees as I was reading and I do not like bees that much keep up the good work I am not a writer so I may not know what I am talking about but I did really like it. I could actually see myself there as I was reading.
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