This poem made me feel better. Since I had no sisters, I've often wondered what fathers and mothers might say to there daughters? Nice upbeat and solid I think with some old school values. Thanks.
I related to the sadness and regret. Could have used a few more hooks, as songwriters sometimes say. I've driven on some pretty harry roads in my old Datsun, but it never went off a cliff. Thanks. 4 stars.
You must have had a great education, imagination or just a damned good writer! I read as much as I can however. Hemingway and kerouac both had cats too!
I am the Newbie of Newbies meaning I have a-lot to learn here. I have some Poetry experience and I think your poem is excellent! I read and write Poetry sometimes.
Recently I have been reading a writer you might have heard of, D.T. Suzuki, I don't know? But, he has helped me to more understand the Japanese and Chinese philosophies in his books. Not everything maybe just thought. Thank you.
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