Nicely written details and a wizard and a failed spell. Poor guy. He practiced another spell and got it right. I appreciate the humor in this and cheered for rookie wizard. A good style and nice scenario. This holds the reader's interest. Sometimes, we have to do things the old fashioned way. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Pin doll. Having one of those wouldn't be good. Think voodoo. Good descriptions. A good style. This holds the reader's interest. The doll looking at you. That would make one nervous. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
My father was a Vet and I hated moving around as a kid. Now that I am older, I get it. Nicely written details and Veterans Day is a great holiday to remember our Vets. I smiled with pride as I read this. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style. Gratitude. We do need to be careful for the good things in life. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. We do need to feel thankful.
A beautiful reminder. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. There are some places we never want to see again. Riding a bus. No thanks. I get lost easily. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Well chosen words. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I think I read this already but I wanted to read it again. Nicely written details and we all get adopted by a kitty. I have know cats all my life. Well rounded characters. You wrote that Spot was a good, loving cat. Creative and colorful. Heartwarming. A great presentation. Always: Megan
A variety of concepts and scenarios. Witches maybe. Magic. One man goes missing in the water in a cave. Suspense and drama. Rubbish. Interesting. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Roots. God. Echoes. Threads of grace. Mercy. Peace. Shattered. This passage covers a lot. Creative and colorful. Inspiring and enlightening as well as uplifting. Well chosen words. A good style. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good descriptive words about the cup of coffee. I can never get excited about a cup of coffee. Diet Pepsi works for me. Snarling cup of coffee. A different concept. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation and nice scenario. Always: Megan.
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is like where have all the heroes gone? They are in the movies. Food for thought. Well defined. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful with well chosen words. A nice scenario. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we try to think of good things and the news never has good news. I turn off the news and turn on music instead. A nice style and easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some romantic sentiments and overtures. A pirates map. We don't need a pirate's map to find love. Good call. Some good reflections. Food for thought. A nice style. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good ribs but I like mild ones. Sounds like a nice woman ran the place. Easy to follow. Flints. Seems like an interesting name for a place that serves ribs. A good style. Well rounded characters. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good reflections. It makes me sad Jesus was crucified. We know it had to be. He was beautiful and perfect. This is uplifting and inspiring. Your devotion to God and Jesus shows. Creative and well defined. Beautifully written. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and the little tyke has a talent for hiding it seems. The father had taught him and he tortured his mother all week hiding. I appreciate the humor in this. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Creative and colorful. A fun read and well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a swamp man. Ancient wizard. I can picture the swamps and alligators. Scary. A good character and nice scenario. He is over a hundred years old.This holds the reader's
interest. Some good imagery. This is creative. I enjoyed reading this. Always : Megan
Nicely written details and a little granddaughter wanting to play Doctor. I had to laugh. I worked in mental health and we had meetings and role playing. I always wanted to be the patient. That was fun. I was a nurse and didn't want to play the nurse. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this and the sweet grandmother. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I hate riding a bus. I went on a trip 45 minutes on a bus to the city by Lake Michigan. The woman bus driver was great. I feel for the rookie bus driver and a passenger tells where to go with his route. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Well defined and creative. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Seems like we get put of high school and we keep having problems and it is like the snowball keeps rolling and getting bigger. Food for thought. A good style and easy to follow. Well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style. Being manipulated and fooled. Words can hurt. Some sad reflections. Trying to raise above things. Some well chosen words. Creative and colorful. This has a good flair. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Babies grow so fast. Food in their hair. They crawl fast. They run fast. Babies are neat. A neat scenario and good style. This is easy to follow and cheery. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Gruesome things in this poem. A mental health day. I worked in mental health and I needed a mental health day but never took one. The world has a lot of problems and a lot of people are mentally challenged. Creative and colorful and well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Falling in love through texting and the internet. One night made a difference. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. Some neat romantic sentiments and overtures. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a little boy's Birthday. Billy took his pie to the club house and shared with hus friends. He almost missed out on his dessert for his Birthday because he already had his pie. His sisters shared with him. A pie instead of cake. Different. A good style with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A cute story. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Life is nasty at times. Fallen angels. Bad people. You defined this well. A nice style and easy to follow. Some good creative concepts. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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