Nicely written details and God and Jesus are King and they are everywhere. This is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening. I appreciate your views and your devotion to God and Jesus shows. Well defined. Looks like you spent time with this. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Some good reflections and some dark, fantasy concepts. Nicely written details and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme and good scenario. Mad enchanted Princess. Camped in fairy clover. No magic beans. No talking cow. Moonflower. Winter. Impressive. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is important to keep children in Church. They need to learn about God and it will help them get along in school better. Teaching children about God and Jesus is so important. Your views are well written and well defined. This is uplifting and inspiring. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and unsuitable boyfriends and parents not approving. Been there. The girl gets found out and grounded. The new boyfriend moves on. Sad. Well rounded characters and getting busted. Creative and colorful. A good presentation and parents always know. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
A southern place to eat. Once I ate at a place called The Pig. It had picnic tables and Barbeque Ribs. I had to smile at this. Creative and colorful. Easy to follow. Some humor in this. Looks like this was fun to write. A neat website link included. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sounds like tge woman is Batgirl and fights crime. Her identity is a secret. A well rounded character and good descriptions. There are two men who she is drawn to and they fight each other. A nice style. Creative and colorful. The woman dresses in a Panter suit. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Sounds like a spirited person and did some magic. Nicely written details and Miss Babe is a well rounded character. She seems mysterious and scary. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you put some thought into this. Creative and a good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I have heard of show not tell. I feel we need both to make things work. The professor found new meaning in the aspect of show not tell. Well rounded characters and food for thought. Easy to follow. Some interesting reflections. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We need more positive aspects about God. We need to celebrate him. This is uplifting, inspiring, spiritual and enlightening. Looks like you spent time with this. Well chosen words and well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The muses garden. My muse needs to come visit more and my muses garden needs to grow more. Some good reflections and nice descriptions about your muse. Easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we want to be ready when Jesus comes back. Easy to follow and food for thought. Creative with well chosen words. A neat link was included with this. Well defined and this holds the reader's interest. A great reminder. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sometimes, we wish we were wish someone else. We do our best and appreciate the talents we do have. A nice style and good scenario. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A dream cottage. A castle. Some good reflections. Creative and colorful with well chosen words. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes our phones ring when we can't answer it. We don't always know who is calling. Missing out on a five hundred dollar phone call from a radio station. Interesting concept. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters. A man and his car getting in an accident and hid girlfriend lives and he didn't. Sad. The poor girl wakes up sad every day. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I would hate to eake up to snaked. Turning into a snake in a different world or planet. No thanks. Some good drama and suspense. Interesting characters. A nice style. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Animals invade the football field and games. They don't know they aren't allowe. We let them do their thing until they are ready to leave. I had to smile at this. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I hate when you hear noises you can't identify. Creepy and scary. Birds on the roof. They could be annoying. Traffic sounds are better? I had to smile at that. This is creative and colorful. This is well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good reflections. A cat licks itself to groom. Maise. Cute name. Creative and colorful with a neat scenario and sweet little girl. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. Well done. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman chasing a man with a knife. Two men walked in on a fight. A little boy hiding in a closet asking if the man and woman were gone. They said yes and he said good. More Birthday Cake for me. Good characters and I appreciate the humor in this. Always: Megan
I found this in Read and Review. Nicely written details with some good reflections. A neat scenario and well chosen words. Fields of flowers are beautiful. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. A lovely presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes, we have to make extra space to store things. A father has an idea for a closet and the mother has a better one. I appreciate the humor in this. Good characters and suitable dialogue. Looks like this was fun to write. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a giant Princess who is mean to the people on a ship which is a tiny toy boat to her. She wants to be Queen and she is Perona. She kills the people on board except two because she wants them for pets. This is interesting. Perona is a mean character. A good style. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I didn't understand why the little girl was burned alive at the stake in GOT. This woman is in trouble for doing so. This holds the reader's interest. Good characters and suitable dialogue. Looks like you spent time with this. Hooray for Jon Snow. A good presentation. Always: Megan
The end of a chapter starts a new chapter it seems. Finding pictures you forgot you had is a comfort. The next step. We wonder what it is. We get through it. Nicely written details and food for thought. Looks like some good reflections and nice memories. I enjoyed reading this. Always:Megan
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