Sequoia. Interesting herb. Maybe this is avwoman you are writing about. Melinda Sequoia. Some good reflections. Women have come a lot over the centuries. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I live in Indiana and ww het hot weather in the summer and very cold in the winter. I het hot flashes and they aren't good. The AC is good for that. Nicely written details and so true what you wrote. A good style and easy to follow. Good Bye Summer. Winter is here. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. An eternal voyager. This voyager sounds mysterious and seems to float in and out. Chasing dreams. Fleeing the past. Whispers follow where they tread. A good style. A neat scenario. A good rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and assigned parking spaces us never good. A secretary doing the assigned parking. She is going to get even with the woman who made her sit in apple juice. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes there aren't enough hours in the day to do everything. God and shoelaces
God is everywhere in our life and our house. Some good reflections. Food for thought. I start my day with Bible passages and Devotions. Uplifting and inspiring. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a girl helps her brother clean his room. They do a good job and it looks nice. The parents get home. The mother is unhappy. The girl was supposed to clean her room. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Entertaining. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sounds like this man is a warrior and trying to find his lost love. He hopes she knows of his accomplishments. This gets the reader's attention. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. 22 Dancing Coes. They danced for 22 Bulls. A nice style and easy to follow. Some good reflections and this holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. Fernando. A famous bull. This is enlightening with well chosen words. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good fantasy elements and sentiments. Easy to follow and good imagery with nice descriptions. This is cheery and uplifting. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Well done. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Take time. To think is the source of power. Read. The foundation of wisdom. Quiet. Opportunity to seek God. To be loved. God's greatest gift. Some words to live by. This is uplifting and inspiring. Words of wisdom. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is sad to lose men in the war. Easy to follow and he was a hero. Looks like you spent time with this. Heartfelt and tearful. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Living in the woods. The wind talking to a person. A woman who can heal people. Good call. The daughter wants the same power but it took awhile. Living to be 105. Well rounded characters and mysterious. Some good reflections. A good style and nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a man needs to remember what woman he was with on a vacation. Sounds like this couple missed their honeymoon due to bad luck. Kids coming along. Creative and colorful and I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is great what we can write with our muse, keyboard and our own thoughts. Good reflections and the words tie in together well. A neat rhyme pattern compliments this with a good flair. Easy to follow and creative. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Seems like the woman is afraid of thunderstorms. These people are stuck in a cabin. The men talk and the girl sleeps and wakes up but Seems calmer. Creative and colorful with interesting characters. Creative and colorful. A good setting. I enjoyed reading
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A place of dreams. Light dances and frolicking. Imagination flirts. Place of pure simplicity. Some good lines and reflections. Creative and colorful. A good scenario and nice presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
This is interesting. Whispers ofvtge dark. I wondered if these mysterious creatures were fairies. Some good reflections and nice imagery. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. Always: Megan
Usually, a person throws up after eating spaghetti. The little boy doesn't like it and gets in trouble if he complains about spaghetti. He throws up when it is being served. He and his father had planned this because Daddy was tired of spaghetti. Nicely written details and I appreciate the humor in this. Entertaining and well written. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Goodness. Truth. Beauty. Power of nature and triumph. The human spirit. Preserve. Some good reflections. Some well chosen words. This is heartwarming. A few words can speak volumes. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I would like to think we have a purpose in life. Some good reflections and food for thought. Looks like you spent time with this. I appreciate your thoughts. Well written. Some good imagery. Looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Change is never easy. We all want good things in life. Some good reflections and food for thought. I appreciate your views. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I found out about my sister late in life. We have had our disputes and our father died. She lives in another state. I am happy I got to know about her. Nicely written details and some serious thoughts. A good presentation. I wish tge best for everyone. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Some good details and I wonder what the story of the clock was. The clock maker seems inspired and happy. Clara was happy the clock was repaired. The Nutcracker comes to mind as I read this. Well rounded characters. Heartwarming. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good characters. It would be hard to send your teen to another planet. I think Saturn would be the best choice. Food for thought. Easy to follow and a mother hates sending your teen away but it is the law. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A fun Halloween poem. Some neat Halloween elements mentioned. Looks like this was fun to write. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. Cute. Always: Megan
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