Nicely written details and a woman living alone can't be easy. The Doctor saying she had to walk a lot. With arthritis, a person is limited. Anyway, a woman meeting a little boy whose mother can't afford a baby sitter. The woman, little boy and his mother get a problem solved. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sad reflections and sometimes, we have to walk away from love and it is never easy. Food for thought. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern rounds this out nicely. Lovely job. Always: Megan
Some good reflections. Silence is golden. Soundless bliss. Peace comes. Recalling that song. I see the beauty glow. Some well chosen phrases. This is creative and colorful. This draws the reader in. Lovely reflections. A well structured free verse poem. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sometimes, we do have to make our own way. Sometimes, we don't always know what path is for us. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern balances this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Wedding bells are always nice. A good style with well chosen words. Well chosen words and some neat romantic sentiments and overtures. A nice rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a man taking instapolaroid pictures and people die in accidents. His wife nags at him and he wants to take her picture hoping she will die. Well rounded characters and mysterious. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Getting out of a speeding ticket and lying about being a girlfriend to a detective to get pit of a ticket. A party of four people and some interesting conversations. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and the daughter's friends left stuffed animals in the garden and looks like the garden was a mess. Stuffed animals perched on a water fountain and everywhere. This holds the reader's interest. Good imagery of the garden and nice descriptions of the area with the stuffed animals. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. No more forever. How often have we all said that? A good style and this is easy to follow. Sounds like the man is a prisoner of his own doing or trying to guide his own heart. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. Well chosen words. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I like Saved By The Bell. I liked Zach and his schemes but it always worked out nice for everyone. Good descriptions of the characters from the show. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman dressed in feathers finds a friend in a parrot. Cute. Heartwarming. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. The parrot sounds human. Creative and colorful with good descriptions. A good presentation and a fun read. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a little boy tells his father his room is messy because a tornado came through the window. Maybe it was aliens. The father loves his son's imagination. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman wanted a career as an executive it seems. It didn't work out for her. She fell in love and got married and had financial security but she wasn't happy. She would stare at an ocean picture on her wall and wondered what happened to their marriage. She leaves. She is happy now. Well rounded characters and good reflections and sad ones. A good style and I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A woman feels her family doesn't care about her. Aunt Melissa sends pictures fir her Birthday she doesn't care about. She gets a thumb drive from her mother's computer. She finds out her mother was writing a book. This touched her heart. Good reflections. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Alira is magical it seems. A clock maker's daughter and she is able to turn back time. A well rounded character. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Fantasy and magic. Good reflections and easy to follow. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a invisible friend named Explorer is real but only Diane can see him. Bobby steals her watch but they become friends and Explorer gives him a watch. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some bad reflections about romance. A good style and easy to follow. We do need to move on from a bad romance. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A raccoon can br trouble. I feel sorry for them. Wrong place. Wrong time. This is some humor in this but it isn't funny a raccoon being in the house. Creative and colorful. Well defined. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and they say God created us for a purpose. I don't know my purpose except I worked in health care and I think I made a difference. This is food for thought and has good reflections. Life isn't perfect. We have God to help us. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The day of all days. Jesus coming to earth to save us. This is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening. Good words of wisdom and hope. Creative and well defined. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Impressive. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I didn't know Mars has mountains. 26 miles high. The red planet. Some good descriptions and nice reflections. A good style and nice scenario. I can see the red mountain. Olympus Mons. The mountain on Mars has it's own name. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some bad memories in the rain. A sad young woman in the rain and he left without saying good bye. A nice surprise. He comes back when it is raining and he brings her an umbrella and hugs. A good style and well rounded characters. A nice presentation and quite romantic. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Love beyond the lust. This holds the reader's interest. Well chosen words and looks like you spent time with this. A good style. A carousel around the sun. A noble portion set apart. Hurling through the vast abyss. Creative and colorful. Well defined. A good presentation and some good reflections. A neat rhyme pattern compliments this nicely. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good memories of the grandmother and the conversation that was special. Her special recipes. She dies. Sad. The mother dies a week later. Sad. Been there. A good style with well rounded characters. Some sweet sentiments. Well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it would be nice to have a deer in your backyard every day. Sweet. Locking your keys in your car and going to the back porch and finding your key and finding the deer. How sweet is that. A good style and nice descriptions. A neat scenario. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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