Love the choice of words you choose for the poetry. Beautiful words and may the Lord hear you requests to stay with you. Love can make you sick when someone you love disappears from you life. God is always with you when you feel He is distant. When I pray and needing His comfort, I can feel the peace from within and through the people He sends.
No one is ever perfect. There are always two sides of the coins. I mean that there are the good and the dark sides in humans. Jesus Christ is the perfect One because He is the beloved Son of God and the Son of man. If you are lost in the dream, get out of the dream into the reality. Shout in the bathroom and you hear the echo of your voice. This helps :)
Is there a lot of problems between both parties? Hope the conflict is solved soon between both of them. Though people seems to enjoy watching couples bicker, I would prefer couples to work out their problems together. Different values may cause the conflict to arise though both parties have the same temperament. Such couples can be the best couples yet worst couples.
Sometimes, life is unpredictable. I admire your courage to admit your honesty in your poetry to wish to have a son. So do you still want to try another one whether you will have a son? Besides singing, some girls also love to repair electrical stuffs.
No matter how great the accomplishments, we still need to be loved. Don't we? There is a meaning in our lives besides of those medals. Isn't it? Though whatever we accomplish today will be ashes in an urn in the future, does it mean we need to live aimlessly?
Love the way you describe and associate winter towards spiritual darkness. When our hearts are frozen into ice, it impairs and strips humanity from being kind and compassionate towards others. Winter is the season of leafs fall from the trees. It marks the death of trees where it stops the growth of flower and fruits. Though it is simple and short, your poetry depicts meaningful existence that humanity need to prevent from happening.
I like the way to transition from cold night to describe about the the moon then to the sunset. It is the fear to induce to the bones, heair, and even how the seasons are related to eerie feeling of fear. A good and strong evocative description of fear creeps into every seasons of times and how the bats are related to humanity's fear.
Sometimes our dreams about such issue is intriguing. News and others' imaginations are mixed together. Most dreams are jumbled up together. Seems that people are so obsessed with comet due to scientific explanation. Do we really see the comet with our own eyes or just belief the theory of the scientist?
Death is always the issue that many people fears. Some people can accept the reality of death easily, but some resist it as if their lives are eternal. Is it due to the money or vast fortune they have to part? Isn't death part and parcel of life? What do you think?
I like this as the sequel to the book of Genesis and helping me to remember the sequence of the four seasons. Normally, I often confused which one come first. Now, I am clear its sequence.
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