I would always try to work on your poems again maybe a day or two after writing
I can feel the emotion but the drafting (daze twice), beseeching I think, and the last line I htink need a little work to push to the next level/ I use Gdrive and edit it regularly when I see errors or realise I'm a little way from what I meant to say
Thanks again
Tidzaman
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