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Review by TeddyBear13 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (2.0)
I feel pain for you inside, but you really need help. You need a phychiatrist and you need Jesus and God. I have felt the pain you have felt. but i have found a way out through Jesus Christ our lord. You need to surrender yourself to the lord or you will never alive.
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Review by TeddyBear13 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love this story so far and I have only read one chapter. This is one of those choose your own adventure stories and those are one of my favorite type of genres. I can't believe you have written so many chapters. You must have been with this website for a long time. Or they must pop into your head easily. I used to have your writing talent but I lost my imagination. I want to get it back. In language arts I only have a talent for writing lyrics now and poems that come from the heart always based on what me,my friends or family have been through. Come check my poems out. I am teddybear13.
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