This was perfect, 6 months ago i felt like closing my heart off and never loving again
I love your vocabulary, it is specatcular splattered with vivid imagery and the whole piece flows wonderfully
Also you can feel the poem getting angrier as you enter the last verse it gives the feeling of you actually reading it and speaking the words
Well done
(One of my favourite poems ive read on here!)
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