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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Haha, a brilliant way to build the tension! I'm going to assume that his girlfriend is pregnant and her waters have just broken, and that's why they need to go to the hospital. This is a good draft, and the story looks interesting. Keep writing - it looks good!
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