Wonderful poem, you have a very nice repertoire of thought and presentation. I find I can really relate to the story told in the words. When I was young I could not find some one who both loved me and I loved them. I found all the kind and enjoyable girls were destroyed right before my eyes by ignorant, disgusting, putrid men. I was lucky, I suppose. When I started to recollect the past of my mother and father I was reminded of the girl They choose to be my wife. although since I was taken away from them that did not happened, but still I remember after high school I had my name changed back to my original and a girl recognized my name. It was that same girl I was to be married to. I decided to get married to her after realizing what my parents had seen in her. I would not be able to live with out her. now she is my beautiful Bouquet of roses just as I am her vase.
I really enjoy the truth behind the figurative words. I really believe it capture's what a writer see's as he gazes at a blank sheet of paper. I also agree it is very easy to write 500 words a day, but on one topic it certainly is another story. That would probably be the reason my High school English mark was saved by poetry and story writing.
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