that is a great poem by the end it sounds as if the dad is telling the son that he is a monster and it only helps my theory that he wasn't mad that his son had listened to what the monsters told him to do, but either way it is a unique one nonetheless.
from what you have of the story so far i can tell that it is really good, and i hope that more is added to it so i can continue to read it more, i hope you write more stuff and if you know anything welse i might like please let me know
that sounds like one you would find in the book of shadows... although anyone can make a prayer that will work so it doesn't really make a difference either way, i hope that you do more stuff like this i really enjoy this kind of stuff... or anything like this for that matter really
even though i don't know a single wiccan that can actually float in the air i still find this a very good poem and i hope that you can come up with more good poems, i am a sucker for a good poem and that by far is a good poem if i have ever read a good one and that means i am putting yours up on the same level as "The Raven"
nice prayer, i would have to say you are a pretty good wiccan, is that from a form of the book of shadows? it sounds kinda like the one in mine but they made thousands of versions of it so i never know, plus there are other books or you could have just made it up, i hope you live a long and happy life, your brother too, everyone deserves this
because it only went to the main character going into the cave i can't give this the rating it really deserves, also it makes me think that he is a wiccan too because i've not met a human yet that can do magic yet that doesn't have some sort of wiccan decent.... if you went into it farther i would rate it atleast a 4.5 so keep up the good work and feel free to add me if you want, good whatever time of day you will read this rewiew
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