I am not really an expert on reviewing poetry, so you may have to take this with a grain of salt, I'm probably going to review the more story aspects and other things that caught my attention.
Now, before this I actually hadn't heard of Storoem's before, so learning that it was a mix of a story and poem really caught my eye, so it hooked me right in. Poem wise it's definetly well done and constructed, story wise, it was actually a very intriguing topic chosen. On top of that it was handled with much tact, and care and consideration.
Showing reasons why sometimes we must move on and pass away. It was very good.
The only thing that really took away from it were periodic grammar mistakes, but that's about it.
Overall it was a very interesting read, and it was well done. Keep going with whatever else you can come up with!
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