Wow!....Too many women know just what you are saying. How piognant, the sense of being trapped. Submission to misery. I could really feel the hopelessness of the character. I Actually wanted to help. Great imagery! Thanks for a great read....
I really lilked this piece. Strong message, and some nice imagery. The rhyme pattern was a bit too predictable in my humble opinon. But still a very nice poem. Thanks for sharing....
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