Well, first things first. You're flow works here very well. I generally don't care about spelling or grammar, all I care about is enjoying what people put on here. I would not want to make her !ad ;) Thank you for posting this!
This was a great poem, and though I am reading after July fourth, this still strikes me as it would have if I read it then. I loved it and I could not find any mistakes on anything. I hope that you have a great day, and don't forget to Keep Writing!
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