Hello my name is Timmie, it's a pleasure to meet you. This is the first piece of your writing I have gotten the opportunity to read, thank you for sharing. OMG I love this. There is so much chaos and orderly disorder, if that makes any sense. Bravo to you my friend.
Hello my name is Timmie, it is a pleasure to meet you. This is the first piece of your writing I have gotten the opportunity to read, thank you for sharing. What a lovely creation you have here. It gave me a tranquil feeling as I was reading it. Clap clap to you.
Hello my name is Timmie. This is the first piece of your writing that I have gotten the opportunity to read. Thank you for sharing. I am going to be honest and say that this creation has me quite confused. Don't take that the wrong way. I read this one four times. Love the word play. If you can clarify your meaning I would appreciate it. Take care and definitely keep up the good work.
Hello my name is Timmie, this is the first piece of your writing I have gotten to read. Thank you for sharing.
Lol ewww I can totally see the whole story play out in my head. What am incredibly imaginative story. I loved it.
There are, however, numerous spelling and grammar errors throughout... But, no worries as those are easily fixed. Keep up the good work.
Hello my name is Timmie, this is the first piece of you writing I have gotten to read. Thank you for sharing such an insightful and informative creation. This was very enjoyable.
Wow, what a story. I cannot even imagine what those soldiers were thinking or experienced. Thank you for sharing. What am enjoyable read.
There are several spelling and/or grammar errors, but hey, those are easily fixed.
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