This story was great! I loved it, and I was going to do an Elementals story myself! And Andrew's Element is Lightning, right? That's the same set as mine! Fire, Lightning, Wind, Water, Earth. I've adapted my Element set a few times before (at one point I had twelve total), but I decided to settle for the one I have now.
I really identified with the high school bullying. I was of weak stature, too. I also have a passion for knowledge. Nero seems to be similar to me, as the Eraknian race seems similar to humans. Being a sci-fi buff, I would have preferred a more anatomically different race of aliens. All in all, a great story for teens and young adults. 4.5 out of 5 (I sound like a book reviewer.)
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