Very profound again... for the die hard Christian You could be backed up too.
"Verily I say unto you, Whosoever shall not receive the kingdom of God as a little child shall in no wise enter therein."
Children know more about God then a so called wise adult. The world is magical to a child it becomes what is to the adult. I nver want to grow up and this poem reminds me of that.
Looking for and hasting unto the coming of the day of God, wherein the heavens being on fire shall be dissolved, and the elements shall melt with fervent heat?
I'm not sure if this is a typo but it threw me "Once I have calm down a little I get up from the stone flooring and walk over to the opposite wall where there are words writting."
If one has to think to hard they lose the message the writter wants to convey. I will now point my criticism at myself too.
I don't rate structure and grammar I rate the heart of what you write. This is due to the fact I don't understand grammar structure etc. I do think you could let loose a little more and be a bit more raw here but "I dig what your sayin"
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