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Review of Giant Hot Guys  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oo I like your idea of adding a secret society of really tiny people. Please whenever you got the time do continue with this. I especially enjoy the second option.
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Review of A boy and his Dad  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Interesting Story , you should bring in the father's friends as well :P
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Review of Shrink and Swim  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
love how the story is going , its really interesting and all , you should bring back Bobby :)
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Rated: E | (3.0)
i love how the story is going so far , but you should write the part where Kyle tries his best to help his brother.
That would make the story much better and it would teach both Kyle and Brandon to be nice to each other and care for one another. Like an average movie about 2 friends or 2 family members
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Review of Shrunk in a beach  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
You should write more than just and how did she die
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