If you ask me I think that this is a great start to this but I think you should have made it a bit longer so we could think more on it, don't get me wrong it's a good bit but I think you should put more heart into it so to speak, overall it's a good bit.
From what I have seen this is a great part to this story, I would like to see more to this for it is going alone good, come on people put more to this and make it have more things in then just some damned unreadable junk.
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