I thought your script was extraordinary. I've read story after story about school shootings, and yours is one of the best. I wonder about Mrs.Johnson saying "We all wondered when you two were finally going to make it official." I found it funny that a teacher would say that, but I know several who would. However, I wonder if there is a better way to word that...
Keep Writing,
Ivory
Oh my gosh. That was amazing. I was in tears when it ended. I'm not afraid to tell you that I think that was the best poem I've read in ages! I have often wondered what I will see when I look back on my life. Your poem is so touching and wonderful. I'm sure I will always remember it. I hope you have had a good life and will continue to write about your life for others like me to read.
Yours,
Ivory
I found your story very inspirational. We shouldn't look to people on TV to see how to dress or act. Espessully with the way people act today. I love the way you discribed your mother. I would, however, love to hear more about your father. What made him your "celebrity"? Do you see yourself as being like him now? It was very well written, in my opinion.
Keep on writing,
Ivory
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