I believe there is 100% potential, but sadly there is nothing of quantity. If this storyline were to be more fleshed out and added to, I believe there is potential for it to be very good. But sadly as of now there is little content and not much to get invested into. Keep going!
I believe this can be considered one of the best on the site. Lots of content, (Over 3,000 chapters!) lots of fleshed out chapters and stories, and overall a interesting, intriguing, non-unique plot that is done in a way to make it original. Good job.
Although a very good interactive, I do believe there is one large flaw: too many choices. For the most part this can be a good thing, but when you go into it you can find it is a massive flaw. This usually results in lots of option chapters and few fleshed out stories.
Definitely one of the best and most fleshed out interactives on this site. There are lots of chapters. (I believe over 700 as of writing) and lots of possibilities. There are few short chapters and the large content vastly overshadowed what few there are. Very good job.
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