This reminds me so much of Boo Radley from To Kill A Mockingbird, so I instantly enjoyed it. I'm getting a horror vibe from this piece, and I really enjoy your writing style. It flows extremely well. Though, a suggestion: I believe it's "so the likelihood of ever spotting him -was- improbable," not were. Other than that, I find nothing wrong with this piece.
Would you mind reviewing one of my pieces on my own page? Preferably the one named "Ada Creighton?" It can be found in my portfolio. I'd really appreciate it!
My initial thought was, "Wow. I really like the dialogue directed towards the reader." Oddly enough, it made me feel comfortable reading further. The "conversation" seems incredibly casual -- very real and believable. I seriously grinned when you began mentioning the website and writing your story. The seemingly imminent cannibalism sort of threw me off. But some authors aim to confuse. If so, well done. Very entertaining.
Would you mind doing a review of one of my own pieces? Preferably a story named "Ada Creighton" in my portfolio? I'd really appreciate it!
-Matt
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/thegoodlife
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.08 seconds at 9:42am on Nov 23, 2024 via server WEBX1.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
