I really enjoyed reading this. It really spoke to me about the struggles of mental health problems like depression and the need to be compassionate to ourselves and to avoid ruminating over the past as a way to move forward with our future. Beautifully written and well paced.
Really enjoyed reading this, I hope you continue to write more if there's more to the story! I liked the pacing and your description is excellent. My one tiny criticism was simply a repeat of the phrase "these questions are my only concern". I'm not sure which one would be best cut, but it would flow better without this phrase being repeated. Overall, a really enjoyable short piece.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/thefinalfight
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.06 seconds at 1:45pm on Dec 28, 2024 via server WEBX1.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
