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Review of What is Blue?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
The descriptions are great. The poem moves smoothly and it's easy to follow. The thing is there more words than feelings. I only get a very tiny hint of what our feeling at this part:
When I sob
For all my
Mistakes
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Review of Sitting  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful.
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Review of The Mask  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The poem moves very smoothly and your descriptiveness is amazing. The ideas you give power to and show.
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Review of Little Robin  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
I like the truthfulness of the piece. I do think some areas of the poem could move more smoothly. But you do convey your idea well.
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Review of Let it be  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Your writing gives an interesting perspective. I like the words you use and your descriptive nature.
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