Hello Aderoks
I am here to give you the review for your poem In a few days..
Remember that it is just my personal opinion and may differ from others. :)
What attracted my attention is the brief description of the poem you have given.
I think you could have given a better title. Suggestions: Fly Free. Or Life moves on.
I like the flow of the poem. The ideas of moving on and forgetting the past, being strong, believing in yourself, believing in a better tomorrow etc have been reflected very well.
The poetry surely reflects your good vocabulary.
Over all, it was an inspiring piece that could help someone feel bright and better.
Good work, keep writing :)
Dear Insomnia at rest,
Oh how very well have you conceptualized life and death, all at the same time. It was so easy to read along every line and connect to it. So true it is, that life is indeed complicated. When we are alive, we think of death. And when death finally arrives, we wish to live a few more moments because we think we haven't lived enough to die. We imagine incredibly and our dreams touch the sky, but there comes a moment when those dreams come falling down right from the same sky, making us aware of the fact that reality and dreams-to-come-true are farther ends of the same pole. You conveyed the message so significantly. Great work done, keep writing! :)
I must say you have very well summed up the concept of death. I have myself experienced it in my life and so I could relate to it so well. I liked the way you ended the poem on a positive note. We all tend to lose ourselves in some way after the tragic death of someone beloved. But through the tough times we need to stay strong and move on with our hopes. This message has been conveyed through your poem very well. Keep writing :)
~Awakwening~
GENERAL OPINION:
It really is an awakening for people who are unaware or not much aware of these diseases and also for the people who are suffering the same.
PERSONAL IMPRESSION:
The poem brought to me the pain of the lady speaking there. It reflects the emotions and delicacy of the topic you have chosen.
It also passes the message that we all should be strong no matter what and that we should try not to fall apart.
It is very well written and I appreciate it. Keep the good work going :)
The way you have written this poem, absolutely touched my heart. I could relate to it so well. It reflects the pain one is going through. The extreme loneliness and depression is well noticed. It reminds me of the time I had been through this 'bleeding heart'!
:) Good work, keep going! :)
I find your poem extremely heart touching. It reflects your true emotions and also passes the message that with time every wound heals and all that remains is a bunch of memories.
I like the way you have selected your rhyme scheme. Keep writing. I hope to come across more of your work :)
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