This is a very heart warming short story. I really enjoyed it because I relate to it somewhat, as I also used to spend a lot of time by the sea with my family in my childhood. I don't really have any suggestions to make to it, all I can say is I look forward to reading some more stuff!
I really like this quirky and interesting poem. Such a simple idea/event turned into a colourful poem, which starts to think, in my interpretation anyway, about the insignificance of life, maybe taking it for granted a little bit. But I loved some the imagery as well. My favourite is the last two lines though:
"I am not blind, just vaguely unaware,
and I spit him forth onto the spattered ground"
This is a really sweet and warming poem. It really makes me want to live in the same lighthouse. It reminds me of the times I spent with my parents on the beach when I was younger. The thing I like about it the most is it's completely honest and simple.
Nice concise title which gave me an inkling of what to expect...but I didn't expect a poem this nice! I like the way it lays it out for you at the start, then the last parts chop and change like the different moods and personalities of people.
I think everyone can relate to this poem well, because we all are different, and all need to accepted for our different and wonderful variety!
Keep Writing!
Tariq
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